Warped and Twisted - A Poem

amemna · Postby **amemna** » Sat Nov 16, 2002 9:39 pm

Harsh words & violent blows
Hidden secrets nobody knows
Eyes are open, hands are fisted
Deep inside I'm warped & twisted
So many tricks & so many lies
Too many whens & too many whys
Nobody's special, nobody's gifted
I'm just me, warped & twisted
Sleeping awake & choking on a dream
Listening loudly to a silent scream
Call my mind, the number's unlisted
Lost in someone so warped & twisted
On my knees, alive but dead
Look at the invisible blood I've bled
I'm not gone, my mind has drifted
Don't expect much, I'm warped & twisted
Burnt out, wasted, empty, & hollow
Today's just yesterday's tomorrow
The sun died out, the ashes sifted
I'm still here, warped & twisted

moritheil · Postby **moritheil** » Sun Nov 17, 2002 1:28 am

Do you want that set to music?

amemna · Postby **amemna** » Sun Nov 17, 2002 1:47 am

You could do that?

moritheil · Postby **moritheil** » Sun Nov 17, 2002 6:32 am

Yes.

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You tell Ushug 'err... spankmistress??'
Ushug tells you 'you can't help it, I've always thought of mori as a chick'

amemna · Postby **amemna** » Sun Nov 17, 2002 8:56 am

That would be so great Mori! Let me know what you come up with.

Thanks!

Kuurg · Postby **Kuurg** » Sun Nov 17, 2002 9:31 am

Baby likey...

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·•Kuurg•·

Jurdex · Postby **Jurdex** » Sun Nov 17, 2002 10:33 am

Awesome poem.

Dornax

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The Raven of Wisdom

Est Sularus Oth Mithas
"My Honor is My Life"

Ambar · Postby **Ambar** » Sun Nov 17, 2002 4:06 pm

awesome!!!

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Yasden · Postby **Yasden** » Sun Nov 17, 2002 4:51 pm

Nice! Good to see fellow poets!

Deathmagnet

moritheil · Postby **moritheil** » Sun Nov 17, 2002 9:04 pm

one Punk Rock Song, coming right up.

Well, the vocals. As soon as I can find a way to get them on my comp.

amemna · Postby **amemna** » Sun Nov 17, 2002 10:16 pm

Thank all of you for such wonderful feedback!

Crumar · Postby **Crumar** » Mon Nov 18, 2002 11:40 am

Is there a talent scout in the house? I really liked it, it could even be a hit song you never know

Crumar.

moritheil · Postby **moritheil** » Mon Nov 18, 2002 3:47 pm

This, and Gurns' 'Necromantic Mirror' are both things that really struck me.

It would be fun if there was actually a scout here...

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Xisiqomelir OOC: 'Human girls are for eating '
Chandigar group-says 'FS: Full body armor, ac5, -5 hit -5 dam, prot mori'

Ashiwi · Postby **Ashiwi** » Mon Nov 18, 2002 4:12 pm

That was really excellent Amemna. You have a great way with words and meter. I started a thread in the "stories" section for poetry, would love to see more of your stuff there. I just enjoy reading the collected works of everybody who wants to contribute.

http://www.sojourn3.org/ubb/Forum7/HTML/000156.html

Postby **Shar** » Mon Nov 18, 2002 6:10 pm

very, very, very nice.

perfect meter !

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Shar

Kiaransalee : (51) [ mmm... fatty leftover pork ]

moritheil · Postby **moritheil** » Thu Nov 21, 2002 3:47 pm

Okie, I now need suggestions as to an inexpensive way to get my voice onto the computer (scary, ne?)

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Xisiqomelir OOC: 'Human girls are for eating '
Chandigar group-says 'FS: Full body armor, ac5, -5 hit -5 dam, prot mori'
Nekler group-says 'do NOT rescue mori. he is to die this trip :P'

Ashiwi · Postby **Ashiwi** » Thu Nov 21, 2002 4:07 pm

Microphones are less than $10.00 at any store that sells computer peripherals.

moritheil · Postby **moritheil** » Mon Nov 25, 2002 8:20 pm

Progress update: cower in ph33r.

www.angelfire.com/in4/nomine/wtwisted.zip

Much, uh, refinement is still forthcoming.

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Kiaransalee responds to your petition with 'look on the bright side, I just saved you some corpses. We all know you would have gotten spanked'

moritheil · Postby **moritheil** » Mon Nov 25, 2002 9:55 pm

Due to the incredible sux0ring of being that is evident in that clip, here's another vocal clip of me singing the first song that came to my mind - 'Hey Jude.' On dialup, so I sort of just clipped a tiny bit out of it.

www.angelfire.com/in4/nomine/heyjude.zip

Moritheil "Judge me not, lest ye be judged" -FunkyChicken-

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Kiaransalee responds to your petition with 'look on the bright side, I just saved you some corpses. We all know you would have gotten spanked'

Drakkoth · Postby **Drakkoth** » Mon Nov 25, 2002 11:20 pm

Alright, Mori, you get the "What-the-fuck???" award for this week.

amemna · Postby **amemna** » Mon Nov 25, 2002 11:27 pm

And thats new?

amemna · Postby **amemna** » Tue Nov 26, 2002 7:09 am

Hey Mori

I actually liked the little bit you had. Sounded good, needed some work maybe but I was impressed. You have a good voice!

Hug!
Amemna

Gort · Postby **Gort** » Tue Nov 26, 2002 8:40 am

Killer!

Thematically reminded me of something Tool would do...

Toplack

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moritheil · Postby **moritheil** » Tue Nov 26, 2002 5:07 pm

Thanks. I haven't actually tried singing in over two years, so I'm not surprised by the fact that the acoustic quality of these clips is "mud."

Updates will be coming as time permits.

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Kiaransalee responds to your petition with 'look on the bright side, I just saved you some corpses. We all know you would have gotten spanked'

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