And So It Begins or My First Writings

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sotana
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And So It Begins or My First Writings

Postby sotana » Fri Dec 10, 2004 3:52 am

Moved to Chapter One in My Chronicles of Eternity
Last edited by sotana on Mon Jan 10, 2005 7:27 pm, edited 2 times in total.
Birile
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Postby Birile » Fri Dec 10, 2004 6:45 pm

Beautiful ambience. More!
sotana
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Postby sotana » Fri Dec 10, 2004 8:48 pm

*grin* Birile, you know you are my favorite bard/elem combo, right?
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Postby Ashiwi » Fri Dec 10, 2004 10:00 pm

Very well done, Sotana. My guild makes me so proud! ::sniffle::
Gormal tells you 'im a dwarven onion'
Gormal tells you 'always another beer-soaked layer'

Inama ASSOC:: 'though it may suit your fantasies to think so, i don't need oil for anything.'

Haley: Filthy lucre? I wash that lucre every day until it SHINES!
bimble
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Postby bimble » Sat Dec 11, 2004 1:53 am

Nicely done!

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Xaril
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Postby Xaril » Sun Dec 12, 2004 2:28 am

Agree with all above! But of course I am a little biased!

Interested to see where this one goes.

Xaril
sotana
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Postby sotana » Sun Dec 12, 2004 5:42 am

In case you're wondering, I paid my brother to say those nice things. *cackle*
Sonon
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Postby Sonon » Sun Dec 12, 2004 6:41 am

sayira says good story sister in nature.

ooc: if your wondering sayira is my pet hawk.
she can talk and is pretty much a blabber mouth when she gets going if ya wanna meet her rp with me
/ooc
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Alysia group-says 'Lilen immolates a terrified squirrel to a charred crisp with his devastating inferno!'
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Lilen group-says 'where are all da trolls i was promised'
Lilen has left the group.
Shayla Rose
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Postby Shayla Rose » Mon Dec 13, 2004 12:49 am

I nice read with a solid start that hints at more exciting things to come. It flows well and speaks even better of your ability to capture the spirit of your character.

Keep up the great work! :)

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